Uproot and Tree
Two trees standing tall
rain, heat, chill, dust braving all
and then came a storm
***
birds flew, nests broken
leafs withered, twigs shaken and
roots jostled in storm
***
Storm makes giants crawl
Even mighty prone to fall
it's nature at best.
These haiku (s) are written for-
I am new to the blogging scene, more so to poems. I have heard the term Haiko a few times before but dont exactly know what it means. Regardless, this could so easily be made into a song! Lovely post.
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liked it specially the last lines
ReplyDeleteStorm makes giants crawl
Even mighty prone to fall
it's nature at best
lovely
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http://capturedalive.wordpress.com/2013/04/24/underneath-the-balmy-sky/
Simple & Lovely!
ReplyDeleteNice set. We can't underestimate the power of nature:)
ReplyDeleteNothing can come in the way on nature's fury.
ReplyDeleteVery descriptive, Ekta!
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing I loved especially the final haiku =)
ReplyDeleteNice story. Nature always has her way. Neat picture to go with, too!
ReplyDeleteVery good nature poems.
ReplyDeleteInteresting image and a wonderful set to complement it Ekta!! Will come back and read the rest of your haiku for the challenge...
ReplyDeleteOh! really loved this haiku of yours. Keep it up! what a description!
ReplyDeleteNature is always so powerful !!!
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