She is my world
This post is written for The MAG 147
&
Three Word Wednesday 3WW CCCVI (prompt word: Fluid, Harvest, Battles)
and written to celebrate the womanhood
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I looked at her eyes and lost myself
A glance at her hands
and found myself
From one part of the world
to the other
she is in me
she is everywhere, everywhere in me
I left her on mountains
I drenched her in the seas
I spread my arms and
lay down on prairies
and she still breath in me
She runs like a fluid in my veins
she battles like wind in my breath
She sows the love in my heart
waters my admiration
and harvests its seeds.
She is my world
and my world lives in her
She is my women
my mother, my daughter
my everything, everything that "she" can be
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Celebrating the spirit of being woman and for all the women in my life esp my mom, my granny.
Numerounity
Awesome...!!
ReplyDelete"She runs like a fluid in my veins
she battles like wind in my breath"..
Amazing Lines. Keep up the great work ! :)
Thanks sooo much Samik...I am glad you liked it :)
DeleteAwesome ... a perfect celebration of womanhood .... loved it :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Green Speck...It's so lovely of you to comment and like it :)
DeleteA nice tribute to the woman, Ekta:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rahul :)
DeleteNice one :) A great tribute :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Hari :)
Deletebeautiful, for all that a woman is! very well written!
ReplyDeleteThank you sooo much Meenakshi :)
DeleteWonderful post.....
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Thanks Debopam!
DeleteA tribute to women and familial ties. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jinksy :)
DeleteLoved the tribute Ekta. Great going..
ReplyDeleteThanks soo much Nevin!
DeleteSeen...thats' sad...they should go to consumer forum.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant piece! Well written!
ReplyDeleteCan a mere male offer congratulations on a beautiful, well-written post..?
ReplyDeleteSure...most welcome :)
DeleteBesides, there are few other males too who commented :)
Welcome to my blog, Berowne!
totally fluid write.
ReplyDeleteSo much power and beauty to womanhood in your words :)
Thanks so much. U made my day nimue.
DeleteThanks so much. U made my day nimue.
DeleteHi Ekta,
ReplyDeleteYou handle all writing prompts with such ease, I'm really astounded by all that creativity happening inside your mind. Good post celebrating womanhood. Keep it up :)
Regards
Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
Dear Jay,
DeleteThank you soo much...Just when I thought Nimue (above) made my day, you made my whole week, fortnight and month :) Thanks sooo much buddy! Keep reading my blogs, your comments motivates me to keep doing better :)
Lovely....every woman will be proud to read this! Great job, Ekta!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Panchali! :) I am touched.
DeleteVery nice and powerful. Loved it. We often don't realise the importance of a woman. Inspiration at one moment, support the next moment....Keep writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Sabya...Good to see you back!
DeleteYes, there are women who inspires and perspires all inspiration in life...Salute to those women!
Lovely ... and moving.
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Thanks soo much Anu...how have you been sweetie?
DeleteA wonderful celebration. Thank-you.
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Thanks sooo much Anna. Glad you liked it.
Delete...lovely the way your words are to me... great take on the prompt... smiles...
ReplyDeleteThanks soo much Kelvin! I am so glad that you liked it!!!
Deletequite powerful te poem was ! perfect ode to women . .
ReplyDeleteThanks sooo much Maliny..I am glad that you felt that way!
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