Noah' ark

September 20, 2011 Creative Writing , humor , Poems 29 Comments

Just one word. Super.

Thank you sooo much SG.

Without ur comment, my posts looks so dry n incomplete. thanks a ton :)

lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

The third line is just out of world.May i use it on my facebook status?

Thanks a lot for the sweet and nice poem.

did they try protecting it "together" ?

@ Kalyan
Thank you so much...appreciate the gesture!

@Converse hiking boots
You can but shouldn't you be using quote properietory- numerounity. Some credit to my creative thinking :)

eCBSE
Thank you for liking it & taking time to appreciate. Keep visiting. Am planning to get back to writing :)

@ Devashish Bahl
Ideally they should. What say :)

:D Writing to itch :D :D how does that work? ;)

Nice piece of poem :)

Thanks Narcissist :)

Good site.....
rosesandgifts.com

as everyone said here..super..keep the show going buddy..

@ Stock tips

Thanks for liking it...keep visiting!

@ Roses,

Thanks :)

@ Ramesh,

Thank u buddy! :)

why would he make things with a focus on shape and not of the consequences?

shouldn't he make things* that would 'last' and withstand at least all perceived/anticipated consequences?

*more so if its the ark to preserve a couple of every living being on earth

@ Kunal

There r so many "why"s around, not each of them has an answer as they r mostly contributed to our belief, thoughts and attitude. Some ppl do good for no ulterior motive, some harm for no substantial gain....why is not way of life :)

@ Shirin

Thank u!

Awesome !!

I guess you have had a fare share of comments and appreciation without pointing out the grammatical mistakes. Without that - it was nice.

Excellent word-craft...

Wow. those first two line were fabulous. i love rhymes. would love to read more (only if you rhyme though). Best luck.

Clever use of words.

Ekta this is simply fabulous ..so much it speaks about relationships.. strength that lacks in many! left me thinking.