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Noah' ark

Tuesday, September 20, 2011 , , 33 Comments

Itching to write or writing to itch? Well, both. So here, a poem on spurrrrr of the moment-

"She was thrilled of things she make, irrelevance to spices,
he was keen, on things he shape, irrespective of consequences

They built nothing, but an ark of paper. nor shelter, warmth & sans comfort
It squashed when rain, squeezed when folded & screeched when trapped.

The autor is half Human, half machine. Go Figure or just revel in what I write

33 comments:

  1. Just one word. Super.

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  2. Thank you sooo much SG.

    Without ur comment, my posts looks so dry n incomplete. thanks a ton :)

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  3. lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

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  4. The third line is just out of world.May i use it on my facebook status?

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  5. Thanks a lot for the sweet and nice poem.

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  6. did they try protecting it "together" ?

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  7. @ Kalyan
    Thank you so much...appreciate the gesture!

    @Converse hiking boots
    You can but shouldn't you be using quote properietory- numerounity. Some credit to my creative thinking :)

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  8. eCBSE
    Thank you for liking it & taking time to appreciate. Keep visiting. Am planning to get back to writing :)

    @ Devashish Bahl
    Ideally they should. What say :)

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  9. :D Writing to itch :D :D how does that work? ;)

    Nice piece of poem :)

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  10. good post ..... really helpful...!!
    Best Stock Tips

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    rosesandgifts.com

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  12. as everyone said here..super..keep the show going buddy..

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  13. @ Stock tips

    Thanks for liking it...keep visiting!

    @ Roses,

    Thanks :)

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  14. @ Ramesh,

    Thank u buddy! :)

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  15. why would he make things with a focus on shape and not of the consequences?

    shouldn't he make things* that would 'last' and withstand at least all perceived/anticipated consequences?

    *more so if its the ark to preserve a couple of every living being on earth

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  16. @ Kunal

    There r so many "why"s around, not each of them has an answer as they r mostly contributed to our belief, thoughts and attitude. Some ppl do good for no ulterior motive, some harm for no substantial gain....why is not way of life :)

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  18. I guess you have had a fare share of comments and appreciation without pointing out the grammatical mistakes. Without that - it was nice.

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    1. Thanks...but where r the grammatical mistakes?

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  19. Wow. those first two line were fabulous. i love rhymes. would love to read more (only if you rhyme though). Best luck.

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    1. Thanks so much Dhiraj! Will try creating more rhymes for you :) Stay tuned!

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  20. Ekta this is simply fabulous ..so much it speaks about relationships.. strength that lacks in many! left me thinking.

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    1. Thanks soo much Mysay! You have nailed the gist. Yes, it talks about strengths of relationship and lack of it as well.

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