Sahib Biwi and Evening Stubble

January 07, 2013 39 Comments


मियाजी की दाढ़ी , बड़ी अनाडी 
चुभे निगोड़ी बारम बार 
अब तू ही बता ओ सखी 
कैसे करू उनसे प्यार 
बेगम जी के नखरे 
रोज़ नए नए ताजे कुरकुरे 
कहती है सिर्फ तुमसे प्यार 
हाथ ना आये, दिल ललचाये 
करने ना दे प्यार का इकरार 


बड़े सयाने, हमरे दीवाने 

कहते है की गोरी है सिर्फ तुमसे प्यार 
फिर क्यों न जाने , हमरी ना माने 
बीच में रखे  यह मुई दाढ़ी  की दीवार 

बेगम दीवानी , इतनी सयानी 
समझे न केवल इतनी सी बात 
जैसे तुम प्यारी, वैसे प्रिय हमें यह दाढ़ी हमारी 
कैसे हटादे इसे हम सरकार 


जाने क्यों यह तुमको इतनी प्यारी 
लगे हमें तो यह अब सौतन हमारी 
आ जाए बेदर्दी बार बार 
ऐसे में हम कैसे करे प्यार 




गालों पे तुम्हारे लाली, आँखे काजल से कारी 
दिल पर छाया ऐसा खुमार 
देख हमें आया जब ऐसा निखार 
तो क्यों गोरी करे प्यार से इनकार 
शर्मो हया छोड़ो और ऐसे  ना मुह मोड़ो 
करो ना प्यार से इनकार 


प्यार से कैसा इनकार, तुमसे ही मेरा संसार 
मगर बेदर्दी मिया जी, तुम ही समझो मेरी गुहार 
जैसे खूबसूरत बगीचे में, लगे बुरी जंगली झाड़ी 
वैसे ही तुम्हारे सांवले सलोने रूप में,
अखरे तुम्हारी यह कटीली झाड़ी 
जिद ना करे और हामी भरे 
तेज़ है गिलेट की धार 
दो मिनट का धीरज धरो और मुखरे पे इसे फेरो 
सटा सट करेगी यह अपना वार 
करो यह जतन, जीत लो मेरा मन 
बेगम फिर बरसायेगी प्यार 

बेगम की सुन के पुकार 
मियाजी गए उनके आगे हार 
त्यागी दाढ़ी, अपनाया प्यार 
"आखिर जो करे बेगम से प्यार कैसे करे वह शेविंग से इनकार "


यह सुन बेगम झूम उठी, इतना नाची की पायल टूटी 
अब नहीं रहती वह मियाजी से रूठी 
मियाजी ने भी निभाई यह छोटी सी ड्यूटी 
लेकर हाथो में शेवर , बदले मियाजी के तेवर 
बदली उनकी मूरत  और निकला चेहरे का सूरत बादलो के पार 

देख के मियाजी की सुहानी सूरत, बेगम हो गयी झट से तैयार 
फिर न कोई जिद, न कोई मनुहार 
दिल में बजी दीपक राग और मौसम ने गाया  मल्हार 
और बरसा प्यार, प्यार ही प्यार बेशुमार। 

यह थी बेगम और मियाजी की कहानी, मेरी जुबानी। जो मियाजी ने बढाई दाढ़ी, बेगम भी नहीं थी अनाड़ी, देखा कैसे किया "शेव या क्रेव " का वार। अपनी कहानी बताइए और इनाम ले जाइये, कहता है यह ब्लॉग अड्डा का परिवार!
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39 comments:

  1. Nisha08 January

    Haha.. too good!! :)

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  2. Arvind Passey09 January

    Loved the flow... loved the concept... loved the presentation... loved your 'josh'. :)

    Arvind Passey
    www.passey.info

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    1. ekta khetan09 January

      Wow..your comments made my day. Thank you soo much!

      So what if I do not win contests. Winning appreciations of my readers and talented bloggers like you is nothing less than an award! :)

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  3. Vikram Waman Karve10 January

    Fantastic (PS - I too have a beard, and am wondering ... LOL)

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    1. ekta khetan10 January

      Lolz...ask your begum or make her read this post or my other entry on same :)

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  4. Noopur10 January

    I just enjoyed reading this conversation yar...too good :D

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    1. ekta khetan10 January

      Thanks Noopur :) Glad you enjoyed reading!!!

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  5. Akanksha10 January

    Wow! You sure are going to Paris baby! :D

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    1. ekta khetan11 January

      Really? How much I wish for it :)

      Thanks AK, hope your words come true baby!

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  6. Ritesh Agarwal10 January

    Okay...let me catch my breath...phew, this was something farm-fresh... If this one doesn't win any award, then I will shave off my stubble :P

    PS- Mujhe nahi pata tha Ekta that tum itna accha hindi bhi jaanti ho :O

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    1. ekta khetan11 January

      Thanks sooo much Ritesh! You rally made my day!!!

      I am glad you lied it. Yup hindi jaanti hoon- matrubhasha jo hai :)

      With all ur comments, I am really keeping my fingers crossed :)

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  7. Saru Singhal11 January

    Awesome, winning entry for sure. :)

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  8. Rahul Bhatia11 January

    Ekta! As others say, a poised winner!Lovely writing with humor, punch and flow:)

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    1. ekta khetan11 January

      Thanks Rahulji, I am glad that you liked it so much...I really wish to win. I have been losing all the time- so jeetna bhi zaroori hai!

      Team BlogAdda- Are u listening? :)

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  9. Anupama K. Mazumder11 January

    What imagination! Hilarious!

    www.anucreations.blogspot.in

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    1. ekta khetan11 January

      Thanks Anupama...Glad you liked it :)

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  10. Kcalpesh11 January

    Cool!! Rhyme makes it so interesting to read!! Sahib Biwi ki Kahani.. aapki zubani... wah.. badi suhani!

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  11. Gayatri Soni11 January

    It's a super duper hit song! Miyaji kaise karte inkaar, begum se jo tha unko pyar apar! :) Cheers!

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    1. ekta khetan11 January

      Thanks Gayatri. Aapke comment ne kiya woh izhaar jiske liye the bekraar :)

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  12. Lata Tokhi11 January

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  13. Lata Tokhi11 January

    Truly entertaining! In the sequel, their kids could ask Daddy to shave. Lol, that's what's happening in our home after almost 10 years of marriage :)

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    1. ekta khetan11 January

      Yeah that's a nice idea! How have you been my friend? Its been long time!

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    2. Lata Tokhi12 January

      Just trying to 'reclaim' myself after my second born :). I have been slow on posts and comments, but I have been following your blog religiously. All those hours spent in the library have definitely brought great results!

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    3. ekta khetan12 January

      Wow! Many congrats...The time just flies. You have the pics in FB? pl upload :)

      Library? hahaha I used to sleep n dream there u know, never read any books as such and people thought such a studious gal ;P

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    4. Lata Tokhi13 January

      Oh c'mon...we spent hours together 'studying' the latest issues of Vogue :)

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    5. ekta khetan13 January

      Wow our libraries used to be sooo hi fi...I miss the place, miss being with you all :(

      When do we meet?

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  14. provoqd11 January

    Hi Ekta,

    Boy, that was a lovely take on the prompt. I see that you've made good use of the multiple entries which they allowed, somebody's off to Paris it seems :p :p :p

    This was really creative and the hatke tone of the entire post, just could not be ignored.
    Wish you luck Ekta :)

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog | My FB Page

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    1. ekta khetan11 January

      Thanks Jay. Guess the multiple entries allowed my brains to open and work in a post that everyone is liking incl myself. hope BlogAdda team takes my entry into consideration and inshah Allah I am looking forward to it.

      Glad you liked this one :)

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  15. Anonymous14 January

    too good... message delivered effortlessly... very well written ekta..

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    1. ekta khetan14 January

      Thanks "Anonymous". What's harm in posting ur name? :0)

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  16. Arvind Passey15 January

    Lovely idea for a post... and the conversation is sheer poetry!

    Arvind Passey
    www.passey.info

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  17. Lifeisbetter16 January

    Loved the presentation. Took a million seconds to read Hindi.. But I did read first few paragraphs. Nice.

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    1. ekta khetan18 January

      Thanks so much Durlov. Let me know, I can send the same in english for you :)

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  18. Nabanita18 January

    Hey loved the post!!

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