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3 Words Wednesday- Too late

Wednesday, June 27, 2012 18 Comments

Prompt words: Cling, Murmur and Taken

(I have clubbed this with 55 word fiction to make it crisp & try my hand with latter- another from my blog to do list. Pl read & give your feedbacks. Sorry for sounding cliche` if it may be.)



She cling on to him and murmured in his ear-"pl don't let me go please, I am losing out". "I love you to core" he said but too late. Her hands fall numb & tears cold. She could no longer hear him, for she was taken away, taken to a world of no return.

The autor is half Human, half machine. Go Figure or just revel in what I write

18 comments:

  1. I cling to your post for a long time. I used to murmur something in frustration when, during the past, you did not write frequently. I am taken by your writing skills and want to write like you, especially poems.

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    1. SG....

      That was lovely 7 absolutely brilliant. PL visit the link in my mail and submit your entry there...too good!

      I will try to write more frequently. Since you asked- you suffer ;)

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    2. "&" and nor 7...typo :)

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  2. I will cling on to this too... coz I am on the verge of losing my sanity... ! in many ways though not about love but pretty much same sort of state of mind I am in..

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    2. HItchie...take care buddy and be good.

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  4. Hmmmmmmmmmmm..................

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  5. Hey... I am very pleased at how you have utilized those 3 words into your creative thoughts. Well Done! Love to read more from you. Nice little piece!

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    1. Thanks Sanchyeta...you too can try your hand and let me know...will love to see your thoughts on same 3 words...btw they have new prompts that you can use.

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  6. Hi, I am happy to be here..loved the look of your blog.. two things fascinated me...one, "Original since 1980"..indeed that empblodens me for I couldn't be a second-hander since 1960...and second by now you know...my faviourite book too is the one that is yours..

    Well, you have weaved three words very well into a heart-wrenching scene..hope she could hear finally what she wanted to..sometimes it takes life times..no..

    Will be back..and thanks for your visit.. I invite you to visit my 100th post here:
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    1. Hi,

      Thank you so much for your nice remarks and liking my blog. I discovered your blog from one of these prompts and must say was hooked to your writings. they are quite good.

      Yeah, I need to write "original" thing as I recently discovered someone who copied my alias, "about me" and use this as her personal blog. So this was to avoid confusion & bring truth :)

      Pl do check my recent post on MAG & OSI prompts (My firsts there & appreciate your comments)
      I am on your blog right now :)

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  8. Nice post Ekta....:)
    If you look at it from another perspective...it becomes WW3....World War 3....my my...:D

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  9. seems like an interesting book .. will pick it up !

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