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The Schism

Tuesday, June 02, 2015 , 6 Comments

Is there a life after death?
she mustered and wondered,
Agog by curiosity
She called it a day

Afloat a spring kissed, autumn on river
the buoyancy in her body,
rowed her boat

she took a deep dive
pretending dead, being alive,
in her credence to claim
to witness what happens thereafter
and the schism

dipped within still waters
still, yet volitant,
she is a picture pickwickian,
in floating cadence

photo by Toni Frissell 

This is written in response / interpretation of this picture. The content belongs to the author/Blogger.

The autor is half Human, half machine. Go Figure or just revel in what I write

6 comments:

  1. A quite innovative response to the prompt. ("Pickwickian"?)

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  2. Awesome writing. She shone like grace through your lines.

    I saw her as a free woman in my space

    http://livetolovelifecrazy.blogspot.com/2015/06/a-free-woman.html

    http://livetolovelifecrazy.blogspot.com/2015/06/a-free-woman.html

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  3. Volitant Pickwickian Cadence indeed ....that rocks mahn

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  4. This part is so powerful:
    still and yet volitant,
    she is a picture pickwickian,
    in floating cadence

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  5. Beautiful and thought-provoking...

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