Betrayal of Light House Dandelion

May 23, 2013 , 17 Comments



The dandelion
that ornate those home, betrayed
out, when thunder strike
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Lunar incandescence
adores night, beautiful sight
Why blooms look in fright?
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Its unusual!
Something eerie tells the skies
Is it sign of rain?
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The lighthouse night soaked
bright, still in hope for sunlight
the Dandelions!
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These 3 Haiku are written by Numerounity for-
The Mag 169 (picture prompt)
Haiku Heights (Prompt- Betrayal)



The autor is half Human, half machine. Go Figure or just revel in what I write

17 comments:

  1. Anonymous23 May

    These are wonderful and your voice in them is so uplifting

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    1. Thanks so much! I am glad that you felt that way :)

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  2. Amazing...beautiful Haikus :)

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  3. Wow, great! They sound so good! I especially love the third and fourth ones. Bravo.

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    1. Thanks so much AJ! Glad that you liked them!

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  4. Wonderful set Ekta, loved the way you managed to combine two prompts...

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  5. beautiful set of haiku ,

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  6. wow! I dint know about the first prompt and so checked... quite a task how you connected the two.. beautiful words..

    Richa

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  7. Anonymous25 May

    Superb but the last one rings in my head!
    http://unshakenthoughts.com/2013/05/21/betrayal-haiku/

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  8. Beautiful words....
    Strikes a chord within.....
    Makes me nostalgic.........
    Thankxx fr sharing.....
    www.mindthenews.com

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  9. Anonymous02 June

    Great stuff Ekta! Very profound in layers.. Keep up the good work :)

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  10. lovely haikus..

    check this poem on dandelion written by my friend.. A Rat's Nibble - Weightless

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  11. Anonymous12 July

    Great Haikus..Loved reading all of them

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  12. Lovely Haikus; nice composition.

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  13. Very Beautifully composed! :)

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