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A Kiss before Goodbye

Tuesday, October 30, 2012 48 Comments



She came like a mild breeze,
a dash of mist and drop of dew
on green leaves.
One fine morning, she crossed my path
I stared at her, all in awe, mesmerizing aghast.

Her countenance was a foam of snow
sailing in her deep blue eyes so dark
her beauty was skin deep.
She was mystical, magical and class apart
"Beautiful", I told myself
"Vivacious", her eyes spark
I was drawn to her
with dreams of sweetness
a sweet surrender in my walk.
I moved ahead
I moved to make a fresh start.

I hold her in my arms,
AS she ached in my heart.
She looked at my face and sighed
I lost myself in,
her hair smooth rays of silk
I draw her even closer by.
Her breath was jasmine,
her scent was lilac
her mouth was rose
that bloomed my heart.

She leaned on me
like rains on the earth
bringing that warmth to my heart.
I brushed her hair and couldn't help
but stare
she was a delight to watch
She belong to me
and I can never let you go.
I prayed as I kissed her palm
She melted in my arms
and rose to my face
She lingered on me
on that day of rain.

Ah! love is such a splendid thing.
and I promise that I will never
let her go again.

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They met on a rainy day, to bid each other goodbye. Love said- I am not a thing that fades and they united below the sky high! Rain touched them but love drenched them....Its so hard to say goodbye.

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48 comments:

  1. Love is such a splendid thing, so agree with you Ekta:0 Beautiful composition!

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    1. Thanks Rahul. I am glad you liked it!

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  2. Really Very lovely, I could relate to your poem very well., Thanks!

    Keep Blogging!

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    1. Thanks Nasir. Welcome to my blog! I am glad you liked it!

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  3. Beautiful! Eternal love! You have captured the emotions of various stages of a romance very well!

    My world, my thoughts, my musings...

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    1. Thanks sooo much Upasana.. Loved your comment :)

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  4. 'They met on a rainy day, to bid each other goodbye. Love said- I am not a thing that fades and they united below the sky high! Rain touched them but love drenched them....Its so hard to say goodbye.'

    Love these lines.

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    1. Thanks Medha...I am glad you liked it...LOce is forever and not for saying good bye :)

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  5. So beautiful ... loved the love in this piece :-)

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  6. beautiful Ekta, you said it all!!

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  7. Love is beautiful in all forms Ekta, great post!

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  8. nice one ektaji...wow c how many fans u have here...cheers

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    1. :) Thank you so much Rameshji!

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  9. this one is so sweet and romantic

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    1. Thanks Rajni, I spent barely much time on it but am glad that it has come well! :)

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  10. Ah! Romance at its best. Lovely Ekta!

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    1. Thanks soo much Swapna..welcome to my blog :)

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  11. This was a great post!... Loved it! romantic to it's core.

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    1. Thanks soooo much...maine to aise hi likh diya tha but glad ppl liked it :)

      Thanks again.

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  12. Beautiful! I liked the line - "As she ached in my heart.".

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  13. Lovely LOVED YOUR BLOG...GREAT GOING!!1

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  14. Very lovely. Soooo romantic. Wish I could express like you.

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  15. Nice writing. Thoughts very well beaded together. And the theme ofcourse is timeless. Stumbled onto this post. Would sure visit again.

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    1. Thanks so much! :) I am glad you liked. Keep reading!

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    1. I've never been away actually, just keep drifting in and out :D

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    2. Okies...hows ur prep for CAT going on?

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  17. A lovely poem. There is something so magical about love. Joined you to be your blogdost. Be mine

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    1. Thanks so much Varsha. I do, too :)

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