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Kiss and Make Up

Tuesday, December 29, 2015 , 26 Comments

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Lovers forlorn
lovers torn
in tussle of ego and pain.

Lovers mourn,
complain and moan
and rush out to anger trips

Lovers aggrieved,
lovers believed
that fault is always two's own

lovers unite,
lovers ignite
the same love that brought them once along

Life is a mesh
happiness and grief mess
but a challenge that you must take up.
fight you must
but always remember to
Kiss and makeup
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I have written this instant poem towards the lovely picture prompt given by Magpie. If you liked my poem and think that it is too good to be instant, thank the lovely prompt. The prompt did that to me :)

The autor is half Human, half machine. Go Figure or just revel in what I write

26 comments:

  1. Beautifully done :). The prompt is really beautiful and your words did justice with it :)
    Thanks for tagging me! Pleasure to read your work :)

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    1. Aww Prateek that's so sweet of you to read my blog and trust me, I am so glad that you liked it. Thanks for your words of encouragements. keep reading :)

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  2. A lovely picture and poem to capture the ups and downs of relationships.

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    1. Thank you :) Glad that you liked it.

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  3. Kiss and make-up is so much fun. Very Nice rhyming.

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  4. How true-

    Lovers mourn,
    complain and moan
    and rush out to anger trips

    and yes, kiss and makeup sounds perfect :)

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    1. Yeah! We must resolve what we dispute...and that is what "kiss and makeup" all about :)

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  5. Sage advice. Happy New Year!

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  6. luv the repetition, and the "implied" happily ever after

    much love...

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    1. Love to you too Gillena!!! Ummaaah!

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  7. The ups and downs of love, well-captured.

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  8. That is what makes it all worthwhile...the kiss and make up. Lovely response Ekta. :-)

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    1. Awww thank you Carrie...I am glad that you liked it.

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  9. Beautifully articulated the lovers mind. :)
    Nicely penned.

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  10. but always remember to
    Kiss and makeup

    There can never be a better advice when it comes to resolving a relationship bother. It could even be such a trivial matter to start with! Wise words Ekta!

    Hank

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  11. The Picture makes me want to swoon. It would be a fun write, you did well by it.
    ..

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    1. BTW, I saw this couple on card today at the grocery store.
      I was shopping for one, Mrs. Jim's BDay is Friday.
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  12. great response to the prompt and I like the rhyme you've adopted, with a pause like an echo, nice

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  13. It made me smile, Ekta. Beautifully written with passion. Happy New Year:)

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  14. Instant poem!?? Lovely and you are very talented

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  15. Beautiful photo and expression of the roller coaster of love

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