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Kiss and Make Up
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lovers torn
in tussle of ego and pain.
Lovers mourn,
complain and moan
and rush out to anger trips
Lovers aggrieved,
lovers believed
that fault is always two's own
lovers unite,
lovers ignite
the same love that brought them once along
Life is a mesh
happiness and grief mess
but a challenge that you must take up.
fight you must
but always remember to
Kiss and makeup
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I have written this instant poem towards the lovely picture prompt given by Magpie. If you liked my poem and think that it is too good to be instant, thank the lovely prompt. The prompt did that to me :)
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Beautifully done :). The prompt is really beautiful and your words did justice with it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for tagging me! Pleasure to read your work :)
Aww Prateek that's so sweet of you to read my blog and trust me, I am so glad that you liked it. Thanks for your words of encouragements. keep reading :)
DeleteA lovely picture and poem to capture the ups and downs of relationships.
ReplyDeleteThank you :) Glad that you liked it.
DeleteKiss and make-up is so much fun. Very Nice rhyming.
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DeleteHow true-
ReplyDeleteLovers mourn,
complain and moan
and rush out to anger trips
and yes, kiss and makeup sounds perfect :)
Yeah! We must resolve what we dispute...and that is what "kiss and makeup" all about :)
DeleteSage advice. Happy New Year!
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year to you too!!
Deleteluv the repetition, and the "implied" happily ever after
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Love to you too Gillena!!! Ummaaah!
DeleteThe ups and downs of love, well-captured.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sherry :)
DeleteThat is what makes it all worthwhile...the kiss and make up. Lovely response Ekta. :-)
ReplyDeleteAwww thank you Carrie...I am glad that you liked it.
DeleteBeautifully articulated the lovers mind. :)
ReplyDeleteNicely penned.
but always remember to
ReplyDeleteKiss and makeup
There can never be a better advice when it comes to resolving a relationship bother. It could even be such a trivial matter to start with! Wise words Ekta!
Hank
The Picture makes me want to swoon. It would be a fun write, you did well by it.
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BTW, I saw this couple on card today at the grocery store.
DeleteI was shopping for one, Mrs. Jim's BDay is Friday.
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great response to the prompt and I like the rhyme you've adopted, with a pause like an echo, nice
ReplyDeleteNicely done.
ReplyDeleteIt made me smile, Ekta. Beautifully written with passion. Happy New Year:)
ReplyDeleteInstant poem!?? Lovely and you are very talented
ReplyDeleteBeautiful photo and expression of the roller coaster of love
ReplyDeleteBrilliant!
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