Alien- Haiku heights
Image source: google
Under spell o' dark,
light cease to surprise me. Ah!
I want a rainbow
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This Haiku is written for Haiku Heights 159 (prompt word- Alien)
Also holds true for Sensational Haiku Wednesday (freestyle)
Also holds true for Sensational Haiku Wednesday (freestyle)
Nice Haiku. Alien and Rainbow – good combination. Just like the album title by the pop rock singer Ferras.
ReplyDeleteThanks SG...We saw a double rainbow from our office yesterday and that inspired me...will post pics soon.
DeleteHow about this album? never heard...pl elaborate.
Aliens & Rainbows is the debut album by American pop singer Ferras. It was released in 2008. Will mail you the lyrics and the youtube link.
DeleteCool...lemme search in the google too to find like minded writer...interesting facts. Where do u learn so much from? :)
DeleteGreat, I need to learn the art of writing Haiku...superb...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Saru...I too have learnt recently...no thanks to Leo n my friend SG :)
DeleteI am sure you will master soon!
This is lovely!!
ReplyDeletethe ending's poignant.
ReplyDeleteHmmm...I thot its happy...asking for a brighter rainbow in 5 syllables :)
DeleteNext one will be sweet...stay tuned :)
Nice, strong and wonderfully crafted haiku. I like the scenery you've painted here and what a wonderful picture you have used.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much...The picture courtesy goes to google. The haiku goes to the lovely weather yesterday and a pic from the MAG which just breathed the word in me :)
DeleteLovely poem. For me it speaks about wanting more out of life. I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathy...yes it do..Bingo!
DeleteWell penned haiku ~ hope you get your rainbow ~ (A Creative Harbor)
DeleteThanks buddy! HOw much I wish...and also for the pot of gold at the end of it :)
DeleteNicely woven with alien prompt --
ReplyDeleteAcorn Falling Rain
Thanks :)
DeleteLove the picture and your Haiku. It speaks of HOPE to me. Very positive in an alienation.Awesome!
ReplyDeleteMine is here
Have you an AWESOME WEEK!
hugs
shakira
Thanks shakira...
DeleteWonderful haiku u wrote! Keep it up and keep visiting my blog :)
have a good day!