Alien- Haiku heights

August 28, 2012 19 Comments

Image source: google

Under spell o' dark, 
light cease to surprise me. Ah!
I want a rainbow

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This Haiku is written for Haiku Heights 159 (prompt word- Alien)
Also holds true for Sensational Haiku Wednesday (freestyle)


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19 comments:

  1. SG29 August

    Nice Haiku. Alien and Rainbow – good combination. Just like the album title by the pop rock singer Ferras.

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    1. ekta khetan29 August

      Thanks SG...We saw a double rainbow from our office yesterday and that inspired me...will post pics soon.

      How about this album? never heard...pl elaborate.

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    2. SG29 August

      Aliens & Rainbows is the debut album by American pop singer Ferras. It was released in 2008. Will mail you the lyrics and the youtube link.

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    3. ekta khetan29 August

      Cool...lemme search in the google too to find like minded writer...interesting facts. Where do u learn so much from? :)

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  2. Saru Singhal29 August

    Great, I need to learn the art of writing Haiku...superb...:)

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    1. ekta khetan29 August

      Thanks Saru...I too have learnt recently...no thanks to Leo n my friend SG :)

      I am sure you will master soon!

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  3. magiceye29 August

    This is lovely!!

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  4. muthu29 August

    the ending's poignant.

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    1. ekta khetan29 August

      Hmmm...I thot its happy...asking for a brighter rainbow in 5 syllables :)

      Next one will be sweet...stay tuned :)

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  5. Chèvrefeuille29 August

    Nice, strong and wonderfully crafted haiku. I like the scenery you've painted here and what a wonderful picture you have used.

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    1. ekta khetan29 August

      Thanks so much...The picture courtesy goes to google. The haiku goes to the lovely weather yesterday and a pic from the MAG which just breathed the word in me :)

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  6. Unknown29 August

    Lovely poem. For me it speaks about wanting more out of life. I really enjoyed it.

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    1. ekta khetan29 August

      Thanks Kathy...yes it do..Bingo!

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    2. carol l mckenna30 August

      Well penned haiku ~ hope you get your rainbow ~ (A Creative Harbor)

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    3. ekta khetan30 August

      Thanks buddy! HOw much I wish...and also for the pot of gold at the end of it :)

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  7. Anonymous30 August

    Nicely woven with alien prompt --
    Acorn Falling Rain

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  8. Unknown30 August

    Love the picture and your Haiku. It speaks of HOPE to me. Very positive in an alienation.Awesome!
    Mine is here
    Have you an AWESOME WEEK!
    hugs
    shakira

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    1. ekta khetan04 September

      Thanks shakira...

      Wonderful haiku u wrote! Keep it up and keep visiting my blog :)
      have a good day!

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