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Alien- Haiku heights

Tuesday, August 28, 2012 20 Comments

Image source: google

Under spell o' dark, 
light cease to surprise me. Ah!
I want a rainbow

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This Haiku is written for Haiku Heights 159 (prompt word- Alien)
Also holds true for Sensational Haiku Wednesday (freestyle)


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20 comments:

  1. Nice Haiku. Alien and Rainbow – good combination. Just like the album title by the pop rock singer Ferras.

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    1. Thanks SG...We saw a double rainbow from our office yesterday and that inspired me...will post pics soon.

      How about this album? never heard...pl elaborate.

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    2. Aliens & Rainbows is the debut album by American pop singer Ferras. It was released in 2008. Will mail you the lyrics and the youtube link.

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    3. Cool...lemme search in the google too to find like minded writer...interesting facts. Where do u learn so much from? :)

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  2. Great, I need to learn the art of writing Haiku...superb...:)

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    1. Thanks Saru...I too have learnt recently...no thanks to Leo n my friend SG :)

      I am sure you will master soon!

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  3. the ending's poignant.

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    1. Hmmm...I thot its happy...asking for a brighter rainbow in 5 syllables :)

      Next one will be sweet...stay tuned :)

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  4. Nice, strong and wonderfully crafted haiku. I like the scenery you've painted here and what a wonderful picture you have used.

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    1. Thanks so much...The picture courtesy goes to google. The haiku goes to the lovely weather yesterday and a pic from the MAG which just breathed the word in me :)

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  5. Lovely poem. For me it speaks about wanting more out of life. I really enjoyed it.

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    1. Thanks Kathy...yes it do..Bingo!

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    2. Well penned haiku ~ hope you get your rainbow ~ (A Creative Harbor)

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    3. Thanks buddy! HOw much I wish...and also for the pot of gold at the end of it :)

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  6. Love the picture and your Haiku. It speaks of HOPE to me. Very positive in an alienation.Awesome!
    Mine is here
    Have you an AWESOME WEEK!
    hugs
    shakira

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    1. Thanks shakira...

      Wonderful haiku u wrote! Keep it up and keep visiting my blog :)
      have a good day!

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