Guns and Roses

("A love story during the time of war. This is a set of two 55 word fiction - one is a letter from the man, who is away fighting, to his beloved and the other is her reply.") Read on....

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  1. mayank588016 August

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  2. SG16 August

    You have expressed very well the heartfelt love between these two.

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    1. ekta khetan17 August

      Thanks SG. Pl read other entries too and let me know who's better :)

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    2. SG17 August

      Will do and let you know. But I am prejudiced.

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    3. ekta khetan17 August

      And I like that :)

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  3. Anonymous16 August

    Hmm...why did both of them stop with just 55 words :P :P :P

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    1. ekta khetan17 August

      Cause Vimal, it was the pre condition of the contest that we must write in only 55 words for each letter :)

      Thankfully, warna you know we bloggers wud have written pages and pages :)

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    2. vimmuuu18 August

      arrey, im talking from the lovers' perspective :D :D :D why did they write only 55 words :P :P :P leave it, I was just being my usual self - nonsense ! :)

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    3. ekta khetan18 August

      Ha haa..waise bhi in today's world who has patience to bear other person more than 55 words? ;)

      What say? Would u not prefer ur gf to speak as less as possible? ;)

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    4. vimmuuu18 August

      Yeah, thats what I would wish from a gf ! But I have a wife who speaks soooo much ! What do I then !! :P :P :P

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    5. ekta khetan18 August

      Go on war front and ask her to send telegram only :)

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    6. vimmuuu19 August

      Ohh, How I wish !!! :)

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    7. ekta khetan19 August

      :)

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  4. The Solitary Writer16 August

    Thats the theme...but this was too good...it just tells you the emotions...awesome dd

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    1. ekta khetan17 August

      Thanks Stephen,

      That's the idea. We should first do justice to the theme...whether we win or not.

      But hope we win :)

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  5. Purva17 August

    that's a very neat blog! good content and great design...
    keep blogging!

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    1. ekta khetan17 August

      Thanks so much Purva :)

      Keep visiting :)

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  6. ekta khetan17 August

    Thanks so much!

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  7. Tomz17 August

    Hello Ekta,

    ur heart is full of love, and romance and thats why u r able to write such heart touching letters..

    .teach me also the art of writing such wonderful letters? wont u?

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    1. ekta khetan18 August

      wow! Thats so lovely tom. Why not. keep reading/ following my blogs sincerely, u will learn :)

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    2. Tomz19 August

      Thats a good suggestion Ekta..But do me a favour..Please make me remember about your blog by making your face appear in my blogs followers list, so that everytime I see your face, I will remember to read ur posts and comments..:)

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    3. ekta khetan19 August

      Sure...your wish will be done :)

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    4. The Solitary Writer19 August

      Then Tom also wishes that you follow my blog along with his ;-) haha :D

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    5. ekta khetan20 August

      Chalo done. Kya yaad karoge.

      Here ppl are copying my post, design etc mindlessly and still winning the contest. Jai ho IBL.

      A women copies the content without wondering the meaning of words and incl the design and gets 100 compliments n first prize...hee hee..Ask her the meaning of the letter she has written .

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    6. Tomz21 August

      Hello Ekta

      I dint like that you quit my blog with no reason..see I had expected this post to be one among the top three, but due to the immaturity of some people you could nt make it..But quitting my blog like that was jus childish behaviour

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    7. ekta khetan21 August

      You called it childish...I call it stay away from people who instead of supporting you, talk gibberish.

      My post wins or not does not hurt me as much as some one who copies my post0 takes the best out of my own ideas without seeking permission, refine and publish as their own idea to win adulation.She could have asked me and I would have obliged. anyways.

      Ranking was anyways goofed up that copycat woman copied the post but still couldn't replicate the essence of contest- 55 words, neat.
      And they have taken the ranks off as well as they realized the obvious ness of their blunder. Go support them.

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    8. Tomz02 September

      Hello Ekta,

      I am here to say a sorry. if my words hurt you, I apologise. I didnt do anything intentionally. Pls..Dont say its a long story..I was busy with some other works..so now only I get time to think what happened there..pls do come back..

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    9. ekta khetan04 September

      Tomz its ok...Relax, I will be there :)

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  8. Vaisakhi19 August

    amazin....to touch hearts wid just 55 words...awesome....bravo...:)

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  9. Arindam20 August

    Beautifully written post. In just 55 words you could able to capture many emotions of two people, who share such a special& beautiful bond that distance could not also make them apart. Great Job!

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    1. ekta khetan20 August

      Thanks Arindam..Thanks so much for the lovely words. While writing, I was very much nervous and re phrased the edit again and again to do full justice.

      Thanks for liking it and encouraging my creativity (however limited it is). keep reading & visiting :)

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  10. SG21 August

    Hi Ekta,

    Just FYI. Some one took (copied) your design and content of your post and published it as her own. Hope she asked your permission first. Take a look at this:

    http://a-blind-date.blogspot.in/2012/08/postcards-for-you.html?showComment=1345438857204#c8535250492230877829

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    1. ekta khetan21 August

      Yes, that blogger copied my content and took part in same contest. She changed the timestamp at her post but couldn't change the time of posting at the blog contest page. I caught her and when confronted kindly, she did not bother to reply but deleted both my comments.

      If u read thru her post, she copied a line from me, another one from another blogger (participating the same contest) and pulled that post and winning adulation.

      Its wrong but what to do. Plagiarist are plentiful.

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