Run Lola Run

October 05, 2014 , 24 Comments

photo by Tom Chambers 
Boundaries breaks with communications
love is the strongest ammunition
Then why use bullets?

Flowing water has no religion,
nor winds or wings of birds has bounds of borders
Then why create it for Humans?

These were many questions
that eroded Lola's notion
and she regretted falling in love

Love was her divine folly
That took her from her home's comfort to Swat Valley
Her lover was an appointed soldier

Why to wait endlessly for soldier's return
situation to move or fate to turn
Iron mesh could not cease you behind.
Take wings of fancy and climb,
enter the prohibition
leave your inhibitions
breath your dreams,
break the barriers,
Break the stereotypes, Shock, Shun!
It's dawn break,
Run Lola Run!


The autor is half Human, half machine. Go Figure or just revel in what I write

24 comments:

  1. Marion05 October

    Holy crap, after reading that ass-kicking write, I'm burning my pencil. You rocked that one! xo

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  2. Vishal Bheeroo05 October

    Beautiful words, Ekta. It's divine. Something I believe in, why create human borders for the soul. Let's evolve and move out of our shell.
    www.vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com

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    1. ekta khetan05 October

      Thanks so much Vishal. I am glad that you liked it :)

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  3. Berowne06 October

    Remarkable response to the prompt...

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  4. Yvonne Osborne06 October

    That was a great movie!

    I love your second stanza. We often regret falling in love. We should never regret falling in love.

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  5. Nima Das06 October

    love ,eternal ,crosses all boundaries. Lovely lines!

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  6. Helen Killeen Bauch McHargue06 October

    Loved Lola running and feel the connection. Enter the prohibitions is a wonderful invitation.

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  7. Tess Kincaid07 October

    Flowing water has no religion...beautiful...

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  8. Amrit Sinha07 October

    Oh God ... this is one fiery piece ... as breezy and action packed and exciting like a Tarantino movie ... you truly are one hell of an awesome writer :D

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  9. 21 Wits07 October

    I can see Lola now! great write!

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  10. Wander07 October

    So wistful at first with your themes of peace then to the frantic escape...thank you for sharing

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  11. Uma Anandane08 October

    Damn good one for the image prompt...lovely lines Ekta :)

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    1. ekta khetan09 October

      Thanks Uma. I am glad that you liked it :)

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  12. C. Sandlin10 October

    Very cool! In the rhythm & imagery it was like a great song from a great movie--and perfect just as is. :)

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    1. ekta khetan14 October

      Thanks you so much for the lovely remarks :) I am glad that you liked it.

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