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Wednesday, November 07, 2012 25 Comments

This Haiku is written for-
The Mag - Prompt the picture Edward Weston (below)



By rocky lake, she
sat wearing no expression
like dried leaves on sand

like rain falls on rock
fall to seep inside the harsh
like water on sands
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The autor is half Human, half machine. Go Figure or just revel in what I write

25 comments:

  1. I loved the soft tone of this poem !!!

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    1. Thanks Green Speck. That soft tone seems new to me :)

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  2. lovely....'like rain falls on rock' - great line

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  3. Another good one from you Ekta :)
    'she, sat wearing no expression' - wonderful line which complements the photograph which you have used in the post.
    Keep it up Ekta :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. Thanks Jay, I intended to do same and glad that it reflected too...keep reading! Loved it :)

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  4. Lovely and well penned haiku ~ rich with wonderful feeling ~ (A Creative Harbor) ^_^

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    1. Thanks sooo much buddy! Welcome to my blog :)

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  5. Very wonderful one Ekta. Very simple but attractive poem. Write more . All the best

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    1. Thanks Karthika. I wanted to interpret that picture in a haiku and am glad that you liked it :)

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  6. Perfect Portrail...
    Well written Ekta :)

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  7. Wow everybody! I am so flabbergasted by each of yours lovely comments. Thank you soooo much! Now replying all individually...love :)

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  8. like dried leaves on sand ~ my favorite line!

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  9. dull setting with intensity lurking! excellent haiku!

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