Dull
This Haiku is written for-
The Mag - Prompt the picture Edward Weston (below)
Sensational Haiku Wednesday - Prompt Dull
By rocky lake, she
sat wearing no expression
like dried leaves on sand
like rain falls on rock
fall to seep inside the harsh
like water on sands
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Beautiful Ekta.
ReplyDeleteThanks sooo much SG!
DeleteI loved the soft tone of this poem !!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Green Speck. That soft tone seems new to me :)
Deletelovely....'like rain falls on rock' - great line
ReplyDeleteThanks Joanne! :)
DeleteAnother good one from you Ekta :)
ReplyDelete'she, sat wearing no expression' - wonderful line which complements the photograph which you have used in the post.
Keep it up Ekta :)
Regards
Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
Thanks Jay, I intended to do same and glad that it reflected too...keep reading! Loved it :)
DeleteLovely and well penned haiku ~ rich with wonderful feeling ~ (A Creative Harbor) ^_^
ReplyDeleteThanks sooo much buddy! Welcome to my blog :)
DeleteVery wonderful one Ekta. Very simple but attractive poem. Write more . All the best
ReplyDeleteThanks Karthika. I wanted to interpret that picture in a haiku and am glad that you liked it :)
DeletePerfect Portrail...
ReplyDeleteWell written Ekta :)
Thanks so much Deepika!
DeleteWow everybody! I am so flabbergasted by each of yours lovely comments. Thank you soooo much! Now replying all individually...love :)
ReplyDeletelike dried leaves on sand ~ my favorite line!
ReplyDelete:)
Deletedull setting with intensity lurking! excellent haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks soooo much Tara :)
DeleteVery nice...
ReplyDeleteThankszzz Tess!
DeleteWell done :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jenn
DeleteLovely imagery.
ReplyDeleteThanks T.
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