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She is my world

Monday, December 10, 2012 , 39 Comments

This post is written for The MAG 147
&
Three Word Wednesday 3WW CCCVI (prompt word: Fluid, Harvest, Battles)
and written to celebrate the womanhood
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I looked at her eyes and lost myself
A glance at her hands
and found myself

From one part of the world
to the other
she is in me
she is everywhere, everywhere in me
I left her on mountains
I drenched her in the seas
I spread my arms and
lay down on prairies
and she still breath in me

She runs like a fluid in my veins
she battles like wind in my breath
She sows the love in my heart
waters my admiration 
and harvests its seeds.

She is my world
and my world lives in her
She is my women
my mother, my daughter
my everything, everything that "she" can be

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Celebrating the spirit of being woman and for all the women in my life esp my mom, my granny.
Numerounity


The autor is half Human, half machine. Go Figure or just revel in what I write

39 comments:

  1. Awesome...!!
    "She runs like a fluid in my veins
    she battles like wind in my breath"..
    Amazing Lines. Keep up the great work ! :)

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    1. Thanks sooo much Samik...I am glad you liked it :)

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  2. Awesome ... a perfect celebration of womanhood .... loved it :-)

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    1. Thanks Green Speck...It's so lovely of you to comment and like it :)

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  3. A nice tribute to the woman, Ekta:)

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  4. Nice one :) A great tribute :)

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  5. beautiful, for all that a woman is! very well written!

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    1. Thank you sooo much Meenakshi :)

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  6. Wonderful post.....

    http://debnature.blogspot.in

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  7. A tribute to women and familial ties. :)

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    1. Seen...thats' sad...they should go to consumer forum.

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  9. Loved the tribute Ekta. Great going..

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  10. Brilliant piece! Well written!

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  11. Can a mere male offer congratulations on a beautiful, well-written post..?

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    1. Sure...most welcome :)

      Besides, there are few other males too who commented :)

      Welcome to my blog, Berowne!

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  12. totally fluid write.
    So much power and beauty to womanhood in your words :)

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    1. Thanks so much. U made my day nimue.

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    2. Thanks so much. U made my day nimue.

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  13. Hi Ekta,

    You handle all writing prompts with such ease, I'm really astounded by all that creativity happening inside your mind. Good post celebrating womanhood. Keep it up :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. Dear Jay,

      Thank you soo much...Just when I thought Nimue (above) made my day, you made my whole week, fortnight and month :) Thanks sooo much buddy! Keep reading my blogs, your comments motivates me to keep doing better :)

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  14. Lovely....every woman will be proud to read this! Great job, Ekta!

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    1. Thanks so much Panchali! :) I am touched.

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  15. Very nice and powerful. Loved it. We often don't realise the importance of a woman. Inspiration at one moment, support the next moment....Keep writing.

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    1. Thanks so much Sabya...Good to see you back!

      Yes, there are women who inspires and perspires all inspiration in life...Salute to those women!

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  16. Lovely ... and moving.

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    1. Thanks soo much Anu...how have you been sweetie?

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  17. A wonderful celebration. Thank-you.

    Anna :o]

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    1. Thanks sooo much Anna. Glad you liked it.

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  18. ...lovely the way your words are to me... great take on the prompt... smiles...

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    1. Thanks soo much Kelvin! I am so glad that you liked it!!!

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  19. quite powerful te poem was ! perfect ode to women . .

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    1. Thanks sooo much Maliny..I am glad that you felt that way!

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