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Grey

Sunday, October 20, 2013 , 37 Comments

Sky changes colors
blue to white, crimson to grey.
Am counting my days
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Earth is a mother
Folding my hands I pray
let new sapling born
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Torn in my own hues,
with teary eyes I bid adieu
my innocence away
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Between devil and
deep blue sea, wins either
black and white or Grey!
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The autor is half Human, half machine. Go Figure or just revel in what I write

37 comments:

  1. Between devil and
    deep blue sea, wins either
    black and white or Grey!

    loved this.

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    1. Thanks Kalpana. Glad to have you here :)

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  2. Between devil and deep blue sea - Ekta, I hope this is just an imaginary writing and not real.

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    1. Isn't it always a dilemma in our lives? Well for me yes it is. Imaginary and real as well :)

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  3. I loved each one of them..the first one a little more...thanks for this treat...

    RS

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind remarks! :) I am glad that you liked it! STay posted.

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  4. "Torn in my own hues,
    with teary eyes I bid adieu
    my innocence away"

    piquant and stirring..lovely

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    1. Thanks Ankita. I am glad you liked it :)

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    1. Thanks Celestine! Loved your name. It reminds of a beautiful TV serial that use to come earlier on Indian Tv :)

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  6. Loved the way you have captured the many shades of Grey Ekta, esp the first one.

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    1. Thanks so much Reshma! really glad that you liked my scribbling :)

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  7. Why bidding bye to innocence,,,Nice innovative poetry Ekta..Good!!

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    1. Generally...as we grow up, our innocence is taken over by worldly wisdom and practical thinking.

      Thanks for liking it Shilps! XOXO

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  8. Very nice! all of them are thought provoking indeed....esp. liked the innocence one..

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    1. Thanks so much Seeta. Glad that u liked. Yup innocence is my favorite too.

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  9. A beautiful garland of haiku and each one reveals a great truth in life .Thank you for sharing .jk

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  10. Very cool and smart use of words. I liked the theme as well. :)

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  11. Torn in my own hues,
    with teary eyes I bid adieu
    my innocence away

    This is so real, I always have felt the exposure, stress and non stop running does take its toll and its not the physical tiredness that's worrying, its the fact that innocence is just such a rare commodity today.

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  12. Very true! Nice imagery and choice of words! Gets the thoughts across! :)

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