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Wednesday, April 10, 2013 35 Comments




It lingers my mind
and all shrines without fussing
between Ram & Rahim



It smells holy divine
fumes in random lines, colorful
like smoky pebbles.



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This Haiku is written for Haiku Height Day 10- Incense
A to Z blogging Challenge- Alphabet I
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The autor is half Human, half machine. Go Figure or just revel in what I write

35 comments:

  1. Beautiful. I felt that Divinity.

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    1. Thanks Sridevi. I am so glad that A to Z happened and we knew of each other.

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  3. perfect ! especially loved the 'without fussing between Ram n Rahim'

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    1. Thanks Priya. That in fact is my favorite line too!

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  4. Nothing to get u into the mood like a lit incense stick...

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    1. Yes...Specially if they have a mild aroma and not so heady!

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  5. I like the smell of incense, and it leads me to pray.. loved your way of presenting, thanks for posting !

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    1. Me too but am selective about it. Strong smell puts me off. Thank you. I too was happy with the way pictures and prose came out and wondering if anyone else too liked it or not :)

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  6. Beautiful...That's why they say a prayer from the heart rises like incense before God!

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    1. That's another beautiful way of putting it across :)

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  7. Incense...you brought back a memory for me. Shared an office with a gal from Germany who was beyond a chain smoker. Because she knew the smoke bothered me ALOT (sneezing, sore throats etc.), she burned Incense ....guess she thought she was covering the smell, instead she was just making more smoke for me to deal with. When I'd get in my car to go home....I would try to leave the windows open to air myself out. A-Z

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    1. Hmmm happens...But in our offices we aren't allowed to smoke inside work area and a separate zone is made for smokers at terrace. I too have allergy to smoke and passive smoking is really aweful for the things it do to you.

      I am reminded of an arrogant colleague who was dropping me home and even though my request that I have allergy to smoke, he kept smoking haughtily all the way in car.

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  8. Oh this is beautiful. Nice imagery

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  9. Oooh - I like this one! New follower here. I'm stopping by from the "A to Z" challenge and I look forward to visiting again.

    Sylvia
    http://www.writinginwonderland.blogspot.com/

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    1. Thanks for following me..nice blog u got there. Pl keep visiting :)

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  10. I loved your style and cadence, and the choices of images was perfect....had a holy feel...

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    1. Thanks so much Joanne...Appreciate your feedback! So much Love!

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  11. I could almost smell that!

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    1. And what was your favorite aroma? :)

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