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Monday, April 22, 2013 , 33 Comments

It followed her, from
morning to noon like lover and
disappeared in dark
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when you cant touch sky
lose no heart. Ask your shadow
it knows to surpass
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Majestic trees stands
tall, bore no fruits, lost in dark
awake their shadows
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who says it doesn't
follow in dark? look close, it
plays with light, to fright

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two shadows in dark
drink upon the sunshine, shone bright
took fantasy flight
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This haiku is written for-
Haiku heights A to Z Haiku Challenge- Prompt- Shadow
A to Z blogging Challenge

The autor is half Human, half machine. Go Figure or just revel in what I write

33 comments:

  1. This is a beautiful Haiku !!

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  2. Loved it - hard to pick which one I like best - maybe the first one. And the pic is perfect for your haiku.

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    1. Thanks so much Suzy! I am overwhelmed by your comments. It is such remarks that inspire me more...stay tuned mate :)

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  3. Loved these lines

    who says it doesn't
    follow in dark? look close, it
    plays with light, to fright

    Lovely Haiku :)

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    1. Thanks so much Saurabh! Glad u liked it :)

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  4. Oh wow! I enjoyed 2nd and last one. Shadows have no boundaries! I loved the thought of 'Shadow drink upon sunshine' Lovely imagination :)

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    1. I too loved that thought...some time I just get carried away and write and such is God's grace that some words emerge that makes me love my own words at times :)

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  5. Ekta, you are so very good with Haiku! Really.

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  6. Nice work with the Haiku...and the picture is priceless :)

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  7. They are all absolutely beautiful, the third is my favorite =)

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    1. Amazing. I liked them as well. Thank you so much!

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  8. Lovely haiku and the shadow on the wall.

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  9. Beautiful words :)

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  10. The 2nd one is my favorite ... wonderful set :-)

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  11. Omg, great words and great image. Music can be heared when viewing such an amazing photo.

    music chart

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  12. Some beautiful lines there ! .. Liked your new Layout ! much better then the previous one !

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  13. Beautiful haikus..I am still selecting the best one... :-)

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  14. Awesome write.Words are magical, nice weave

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  15. You never fail to astonish me with your work .. Amazing!truly,Ekta .. fabulous composition .. excellent I say !

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  16. Amazing...beautiful composition!

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  17. I find the beauty of shadowy darkness magnificent in the post enriched with the subtlety of poetry.

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  18. beautiful narration...

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  19. Truly awesome. Very nice lines.

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