Shadow

April 22, 2013 , 33 Comments

It followed her, from
morning to noon like lover and
disappeared in dark
***
when you cant touch sky
lose no heart. Ask your shadow
it knows to surpass
***
Majestic trees stands
tall, bore no fruits, lost in dark
awake their shadows
***
who says it doesn't
follow in dark? look close, it
plays with light, to fright

***
two shadows in dark
drink upon the sunshine, shone bright
took fantasy flight
***
This haiku is written for-
Haiku heights A to Z Haiku Challenge- Prompt- Shadow
A to Z blogging Challenge

The autor is half Human, half machine. Go Figure or just revel in what I write

33 comments:

  1. Afshan Shaik22 April

    This is a beautiful Haiku !!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Suzy22 April

    Loved it - hard to pick which one I like best - maybe the first one. And the pic is perfect for your haiku.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ekta khetan18 July

      Thanks so much Suzy! I am overwhelmed by your comments. It is such remarks that inspire me more...stay tuned mate :)

      Delete
  3. Saurabh Chawla22 April

    Loved these lines

    who says it doesn't
    follow in dark? look close, it
    plays with light, to fright

    Lovely Haiku :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ekta khetan23 July

      Thanks so much Saurabh! Glad u liked it :)

      Delete
  4. Sri Valli22 April

    Oh wow! I enjoyed 2nd and last one. Shadows have no boundaries! I loved the thought of 'Shadow drink upon sunshine' Lovely imagination :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ekta khetan24 July

      I too loved that thought...some time I just get carried away and write and such is God's grace that some words emerge that makes me love my own words at times :)

      Delete
  5. Naina Madan22 April

    Ekta, you are so very good with Haiku! Really.

    ReplyDelete
  6. Kajal Kapur22 April

    Nice work with the Haiku...and the picture is priceless :)

    ReplyDelete
  7. Anonymous22 April

    They are all absolutely beautiful, the third is my favorite =)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. ekta khetan06 August

      Amazing. I liked them as well. Thank you so much!

      Delete
  8. JANU22 April

    Nice shadow play.

    ReplyDelete
  9. sulekkha22 April

    Lovely haiku and the shadow on the wall.

    ReplyDelete
  10. Unknown23 April

    Beautiful words :)

    ReplyDelete
  11. Amrit Sinha24 April

    The 2nd one is my favorite ... wonderful set :-)

    ReplyDelete
  12. podjetja28 June

    Omg, great words and great image. Music can be heared when viewing such an amazing photo.

    music chart

    ReplyDelete
  13. Anonymous22 July

    Some beautiful lines there ! .. Liked your new Layout ! much better then the previous one !

    ReplyDelete
  14. Anonymous22 July

    Beautiful haikus..I am still selecting the best one... :-)

    ReplyDelete
  15. The Mukhtiars22 July

    Beautiful

    ReplyDelete
  16. Easwar Arumugam22 July

    Awesome write.Words are magical, nice weave

    ReplyDelete
  17. Unknown23 July

    very nice :)

    ReplyDelete
  18. Anonymous23 July

    You never fail to astonish me with your work .. Amazing!truly,Ekta .. fabulous composition .. excellent I say !

    ReplyDelete
  19. Anonymous23 July

    Amazing...beautiful composition!

    ReplyDelete
  20. Unknown23 July

    I find the beauty of shadowy darkness magnificent in the post enriched with the subtlety of poetry.

    ReplyDelete
  21. Swati23 July

    beautiful narration...

    ReplyDelete
  22. Bushra Muzaffar24 July

    Truly awesome. Very nice lines.

    ReplyDelete

Hi Folks,

You heard me...now its time for Bouquets and Brickbats!

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)

My Social Media Channels